Wednesday, 23 October 2013

More Story Revisions

Ok so this has been worked through again.

-Travelling through various scenery, each more tiring and draining on the pony than the next. The load carried is also much heavier in each scene.
-Enter a glade
-Bard is inspecting a particular item of treasure.
-Which he then proceeds to shove down his shirt.
-Caravan grinds to a halt.
-A dark looming figure appears/manifests from the glades shadows.-
-He then glides over to our heroes.
-The villain points at our heroes accusingly.
-The lady swoons, the knight braces for combat and the bard shakes and quivers.
-The finger then snaps to the pony whose equally as nervous.
The villain glides over and picks up the pony
-The pony( carried underarm and facing our heroes) notices a patch on the heroes back.
-With one hell of a smug face he glances back and sticks his tongue out. (the patch is revealed to be of the "Pony Protection League")
- Our heroes are dumbstruck
Credits Roll
-Peppered by sketches of all the abuse the pony has been put through.
-End still/ animation of the knight struggling to pull the cart.

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